There’s a common misconception that crying is a sign of weakness. And it’s a stereotype we need to break. Crying is often therapeutic and it’s a healthy way to express emotion. It’s a way to overcome difficult feelings and must be normalized for men, women, parents and kids. To describe that, I’ve written a short verse and I’d love some feedback!
Feel the weight of the world,
On her wearied shoulders,
Strives to stay stoic,
As the tension smolders,
Her hands start trembling,
Her lower lip quivers,
Her eyes reveal,
A tell-tale shimmer,
A lonesome droplet,
Spills down her cheek,
Deceived by emotion,
They surmise she is weak.
The brackish water,
Stings her aching wounds,
That now lay bare,
A plight so cruel,
It wracks her body,
Relinquished control,
Once tears of affliction,
Now cleanse her soul,
She takes a deep breath,
Stoic and somber,
You thought it was weakness,
But she..
Shes's never been stronger.
Beautiful, really! 🙏🏾✨
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Crying doesn’t have to be seen as weakness. On the contrary, it’s quite brave to dare & cry.
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Haha exactly, hence its a misconception
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It’s a beautiful piece of writing Shruti. You made the description of cry lovely with you majestic way of using words. Keep writing and keep growing. God bless you.
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Thank you so much Ritika!
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Your words are throbbing in my heart! Wow! Really beautiful!
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Wow, thank you so much!
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I agree! This was a wonderful poem.. touching and beautiful! That last line was profound 🔥
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Thank you so much!
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Wow. Stunning piece ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much!!
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I completely agree, this is soo touching and amazing!! Showing emotions isn’t a weakness it’s a sign of strength!
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Thank you Anya! So glad you agree!
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Beautifully penned ❣
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Thanks Dulcy!
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tears and feelings are the inroad to the soul.
Beautiful Shruti! ❤️ Cindy
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Absolutely! Thank you Ms Cindy ♥️
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❤️🤗
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Beautiful 🌼🥺🥺
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Thank you so much!!
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Best beautiful piece here. ❤️
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Wow, thanks a ton!
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Beautiful 😊
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Thank you Era💕
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Pleasure 😀
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Excellent writing!
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Thank you so much 🤍
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Lovely and powerful
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Thank you so much Marie🌻
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Lovely poem. And so true. Tears isn’t a weakness. It’s a human way of coping with whatever hardships which would otherwise makes them self-destruct.
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Thanks Jessica! I agree completely, letting it out usually has better outcomes than keeping it in!
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Oh there is so much power in this poem Shruti. Amazing.
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Thank you so much♥️ means a lot
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It’s definitely wayy too late for me, we were taught stringently from childhood that we must never cry, the guys. It’s so deeply ingrained now. I think it was a good lesson I might pass on to a son someday, there are other therapeutic ways we’ve made due with for generations.
I’m not contradicting you, I’m just saying..
Loved the post though, compelling.
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I understand, the motive isn’t to convince everyone to cry, rather to convince those who do- that it’s okay to do so. Everyone’s coping mechanism is different, I respect that! Thank you!
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Oh, now I get😃
That’s awesome, I agree entirely.
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Lovely written piece!
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Thank you!🌻
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Well written. It’s always a pleasure reading your poetry and many congratulations for your work featuring in different publications. Keep going. Do visit my site for the latest post “Harbouring a Dream”.
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Thank you so much! Definitely, I’d love to read it!
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True!
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Heart-touching words 👌👌
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